Open Poetry #45 |
One Rainy Dream |
ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
It was a rainy night, so of course I would dream of rain. It glazed the streets, roofs, cars and minds. It rained empty on my window pane, danced like fire touching clay, or like leaves being lead by the wind. I listen to the wind, that compete's with thunder on who shall shatter the world. Who would bring someone to their knees. Or who would bring people closer that has been left alone on night's like this. I stare out into the rainy night filled with heavy rain, until my eyes open within the sunrise |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I do this many a night here in British Columbia, that and "rust away." |
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romantico Junior Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 16NYC |
danced like fire touching clay, or like leaves being lead by the wind. Nice visual...I very much enjoyed this write...! Lovely! W. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Mysteria- thank yu for your comment, you won't rust away. Sunshine will come forth Romantico- I'm glad you like the poem and a verse from it as well. James- I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem, thank you. |
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