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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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So this is how it feels in the end Numb and aware at the same time Lost a lover and worse, a friend Faded from the photographs in my mind It’s the ambivalence that haunts me most How I’ve become my own transparent ghost Never thought I would live to see this day Used to spend hours writing of such a thing While letting the words have all the play Now the absence of feeling is the thing that stings We both realize we’ve reached that point unintended As we acknowledge now what has just ended |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sometimes it just happens like this. A sad finale, but when it is acknowledged by both parts consciously, it is probably less dramatically experienced. A very mature write, I would say. Love, Margherita |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you Margherita, that's more than what I've been acused of before. lol |
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