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Locket |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Wrap the flag around your wrist Feel the metal on your leg You know.. It's probably not too late to stop Press the pedal Hear it purr Grip the metal The weight much heavier then before Squeeze tight and shield your eyes from the flashing light You can't remember why you are there Feel the burning while you fall No one comes to your aid No one claims that they saw Just a mess to clean up is you Existence is gone and nothing is you Unheard forgotten and gone is you Only one who cries at night Carries your locket Sees your face When there is no light "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I liked how this is written...sad, very sad. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It is sad and the writing is stark. You just put it out there without a lot of words to wade through. A |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Sad!!! |
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