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xXSilentMelodiesXx
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0 posted 2009-11-30 02:55 AM


"Come, sister, lets run away
The dark is not a place to play"
He grabs my hand, pulls me along
It's all I can do to try and stay strong.

Because you're in the dark--I saw you there
Stuck in a place of eternal dispare.
I want to save you, to take you away
But the light just won't let me stay.

The choice comes now--Stay or go
Do I stay with you? Or let you go?
My hand pulls free; the light is slipping
The darkness surrounds; the fog thickening.

But then there you are, a shimmer of hope
Maybe with you, I somehow might cope.
Because within the darkness, I came for you
And with that resolve, my light shall stay true.  


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2009-11-30 09:45 AM


Heartfelt write. Even if success is not always granted it is still a noble action to try to help others to find the exit out of black tunnels.

But never remain in the dark, beckon from the light. That's the strongest emergency position.

Love,
Margherita  

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