A moment as real as forever

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Open Poetry #45

A moment as real as forever

Fade
Junior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane

0 posted 2009-11-28 02:27 PM

A breath in the tornado
A whisper in the scream
A twinkle in the sunlight
A wish within a dream

A tear drop in the ocean
A sigh amid the song
A lost soul in the nations
The weak among the strong

One part away from nothing
Not missed witout the whole
A solitary heartbeat skipped
Who will ever know?

I will
You will
God will

Let midnight swallow the shade
A moment is real as forever
No matter how quickly it fades.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-11-28 09:34 PM

This is sadly beautiful, and really well done on so many levels.

A belated welcome to Passions~
I truly enjoyed your poem.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2009-11-28 10:21 PM

Excellent writing. latearrival

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