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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2009-11-25 09:48 PM


They stepped off the train;
Two silences a hush in the rain;
The boys never came again.

Three shouts but they;
Don't live there anymore;
There they stand with folded wings and a nod.

In an unfamiliar shake;
Hours fading away;
A train whistles far down and gone away.

see also:  poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-26 08:41 AM


Trains do evoke so many melancholic moments ...

Your write transmits this feeling very well.

Love,
Margherita

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