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Open Poetry #45

A Hustling Train

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2009-11-25 09:48 PM

They stepped off the train;
Two silences a hush in the rain;
The boys never came again.

Three shouts but they;
Don't live there anymore;
There they stand with folded wings and a nod.

In an unfamiliar shake;
Hours fading away;
A train whistles far down and gone away.

see also: poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-26 08:41 AM

Trains do evoke so many melancholic moments ...

Your write transmits this feeling very well.

Love,
Margherita

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