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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-11-24 06:25 PM




All Of the Love
In My Heart

She's wearing
my engagement ring.
Small but beautiful,
precious like her,
and I never want
to give her
an occasion
to doubt me
or a reason
to remove it,
for it was given
with all of
the love
in my
heart.

JamesLee
23November
2009

  

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Inspired-8
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Pluto
1 posted 2009-11-25 12:13 PM


Beautiful......
Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
2 posted 2009-11-25 05:51 AM


Tenderness and faith is such a lovely way to begin...   Congratulations!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-11-25 06:09 PM


Thank you inspired and Klassy for the wonderful responses...James
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2009-11-25 09:44 PM



Only hate and hell
and suffering and pain
will remain in unison
with nothing good at all
if the last angel falls.

Lets hope that never happens James.

Lindsay

Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274

5 posted 2010-05-10 05:11 PM


Very Nice.
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