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Open Poetry #45

Meant To Be

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-11-19 10:32 AM

I opened a gate that I had thought been closed
Something locked away once long ago
That of saddest deaths are those of the heart,
Where the soul withers and breaks apart

I pointed this out to her and made my plea
Spelled out so well and carefully
And hesitated, afraid to make unclear
The point of which I wanted her to hear

She gazed first with those luminous eyes
That traveled from my heart, then to meet mine
An instant became frozen forever then
As the words resounded, ‘You are everything’

In that brief moment bathed in her glow
It was then and there that I came to know
Of love that echoes between her and me
Which shall resound all through eternity

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-11-19 11:09 AM

love this!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-11-19 03:12 PM

Chalmette Guy - nice write of a relationship, well done...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-11-19 05:41 PM

Delightful! Nice rhythm too.

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

4 posted 2009-11-19 05:59 PM

i really liked how you described the moment we all hold our breath & hope to god that we haven't blown it....

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-11-21 04:26 PM

In that brief moment bathed in her glow
It was then and there that I came to know
Of love that echoes between her and me
Which shall resound all through eternity

This is so very beautiful, my friend. *S* I've missed your incredible rhymes! *S*

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