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Tears Shall Drown The Wind
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Tears Shall Drown The Wind |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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The wind angrily recalls your absence Your fall from my physical presence Biting in its cold, cruel finality Darkness overcomes all with certainty Damage I have done by all accounts Beyond repair now, the torture mounts Torn between choices of anguish and despair Others come and go as they live unaware To the cold wind which surrounds me Like a living thing breathing down on me And I am just about ready to give in And then tears shall drown the wind |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is awesome  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
The wind angrily recalls your absence Your fall from my physical presence Biting in its cold, cruel finality ~love this : ) |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Yes,yes,yes this is good. Depression at its heaviest. Great write. I liked this line alot. "Like a living thing breathing down on me" Yoin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aw, I know you miss me, but this is pretty extreme!  All joking aside, this is an excellent read! On the bright side, maybe it won't be windy this week? |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Wicked sad write. I understand this feeling. Hope you see her soon, yo. P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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