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Eirian
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since 2009-04-13
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0 posted 2009-11-18 03:11 AM



This naked flame burns hot
Dancing in the breeze,
Writhing and twisting
Melting me to my knees

The world is aglow with
My soft and gentle light,
An enticing warmth
In this endlessly dark night

Shadows flicker around us,
Past loves that since moved on
This flame it envelopes us,
This passion burning strong

My warmth I pour into you
As I melt into the night
Your arms around me tighten
The world now seems so right

© Copyright 2009 Sharree Vitnell - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-18 08:21 AM


Very lovely romantic write and with an uplifting conclusion.

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-11-19 03:11 PM


Eirian - nice romantic write...

BC

Lamar Cole
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3 posted 2009-11-19 03:55 PM


Good romantic poem.
Goldenrose
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4 posted 2009-11-19 06:26 PM


Your flame flickers and burns well here... there is fine promise to your poetry...well done and thank you..

Goldenrose.

naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
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5 posted 2009-11-19 07:02 PM


thank you for sharing this really warm, beautiful poem...
LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-11-20 10:09 PM




My warmth I pour into you
As I melt into the night
Your arms around me tighten
The world now seems so right

A lovely romantic post my dear,
You wrote it well, enjoyed.

Lindsay

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