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This Flame
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This Flame |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
This naked flame burns hot Dancing in the breeze, Writhing and twisting Melting me to my knees The world is aglow with My soft and gentle light, An enticing warmth In this endlessly dark night Shadows flicker around us, Past loves that since moved on This flame it envelopes us, This passion burning strong My warmth I pour into you As I melt into the night Your arms around me tighten The world now seems so right |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely romantic write and with an uplifting conclusion. Love, Margherita  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Eirian - nice romantic write... BC |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Good romantic poem. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your flame flickers and burns well here... there is fine promise to your poetry...well done and thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
thank you for sharing this really warm, beautiful poem... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My warmth I pour into you As I melt into the night Your arms around me tighten The world now seems so right A lovely romantic post my dear, You wrote it well, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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