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The Last November Sun.
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The Last November Sun. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110
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 The Last November Sun. If you listen, there is music in the wind, Laughter in the sway of the trees The grass as it sways sings it's mellow song And the flute of the lone wanderer plays. The time of the winter descends upon us as November begins to fade snow and ice lies before us in the dark! under the shade. The last of the suns rays of November clings on for life each passing day And soon the death of the Autumn will silently fade away Annie 17-11-2009 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely atmosphere, I love the poem. yann |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awww Thank you yann  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you James  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
anniepimm54 - november is here and is leaving too quickly for me. December brings the cold winds, and the snow. But also happy times around the 25th... BC |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Yes! it dose for a lot of people |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Yes the sun burns bright but glowing, descrptive and well observed poem..enjoyed reading..thank you... Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you Goldenrose thats so nice of you  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hello dear Annie, it sounds rather sad the way you tell it but you wrote it well. Over here in Aussie-land Spring is almost gone and Summer is just around the corner. It has been as hot as hell this last week and the bush fires have started already and it's not even Summer. A big hug dear Lady. Lindsay |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awww Thank you Lindsay, my mum and sister live in Mandurah in Perth, and I have been for a visit there in summer so I can well understand how hot it can get, we could do with some of that sun here in England right now with all the rain and floods we have.. |
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