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Following the Dream
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Following the Dream |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
On the far horizon the dream still glimmers, Though, like a mirage, it shifts and shimmers as it dances o'er the sands of time into a starry night sublime... where I will follow. Ida Werrett [This message has been edited by Marchmadness (11-17-2009 03:47 PM).] |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Dear Ida, this short and poignant piece is evocative of one of my favourite songs: Moon River. Keep following that path. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, I love starting my day and ending my day with you. Reading your poetry calms my insides. I love what I see with your words. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice one Ida, great rhyming. enjoyed. Love, Lindsy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wonderful imagery, Ida. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
MarchMadness - A vivid dream has a magnetism. Even when it loses its clarity and shimmers, we are still drawn to it to reestablish the lost focus that first pulled us. Very nice work Ida. Namyh |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
..."into a starry night sublime" Short and sweet this one. Magical, and woven with strands of star dust, just the way dreams should be, and close enough to touch!  Karen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and there you shall find your own Shargri-La!  Sweet dreams, my dear Ida Belle! Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is great, Ida. I guess we all follow our dreams because they're so much quicker than us. It can seem like an eternity before we catch up with them but I suspect that we lay the groundwork now for a future lifetime if such a thing be. Helen |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, I adore this! Love, Margherita  |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Dream on, Ida! good stuff. =) Joe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marchmadness - a stirring write, well done... BC |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Small words big meaning, there is a nice truth to this poem and i enjoyed reading.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for following my dream with me. Ida |
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