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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
I loved it when you smiled really smiled the corners of your mouth curled up made me see the man you really are I treasured it when you teased ‘just like his daddy’ and you looked at me daring me to react twinkles in your eyes ‘I love you’ this could be us again I want to be back back in your embrace back in your heart back in your soul make me yours again |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Remembering precious moments brings the deep longing to the surface. This is most beautiful and the yearning is rendered with elegance yet with great intensity. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have experienced similar longings (thankfully they have long since past) and you expressed those emotions with grace and eloquence. The yeanrning has now passed but like you, the wqrm memories remain. May love fill up your life with Light.   EA |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
I can relate. Nice work. |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
Dear Margherita: Thanks for posting again such a nice reply, your comments I especially appreciate, since I am big fan of your style. To EarthAngel and Eirian: The environment on PiP is so enspiring to me, thanks to the both of you. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
First of all: a lovely poem you've written here. As to your question why I post on an English speaking site: send me an email and I'll tell you all about it (just click the envelop in my post). Too long to put it here and you don't have an emailaddress showing. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ohhh, the eyes have it. Your poem leaves me smiling and dreaming of blue eyes that twinkle and shine with laughterb and warmth. I truly enjoyed this.  KL |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
shalisadefa - precious moments are just that, precious, however at times they are fleeing... BC |
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