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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Unbroken again the seasons change under foot the ground is different outside next to the back door a brown clay pot sits silently amazingly tender purple pink petals from a leafless stick standing neglected life still remains…unbroken "I'm so hard to handle |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is pretty, and pretty neat |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Will call tomorrow  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear poetess, you see beyond the obvious. Each vision is a treasure to behold. An impressionable vignette.   Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
delightful seasonal impressionism! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Though it's still a long time until spring, your words bring its hope... we'll bloom again if we can only be as resilient as that stick. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, how you noticed this and how you shared it. Just yesterday I marveled at a rose blooming (smaller than in Summer, but still!) in midst of dry leaves ... Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very pretty indeed, bittersweet. ~ I loved this Helen, you mixed themes together well. Always a pleasure to read your stuff, always leaves me with questions unanswered, but expecting to know the answer later on in life. ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"life still remains…unbroken" on my front steps...the same ~~ M |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
like this one bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Very beautiful autumn vignette you have captured here, Helen. Perfectly crafted and poignant in feeling. Namaste Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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