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Open Poetry #45

Peruse of Autumns Gold

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-11-13 12:32 PM

Peruse of Autumns Gold

Spectacle, waves wheat on wind
Harvest bold and plump sequin
Sigh and symbol here again
My fingers play in autumn

Moan of soulful songs implore
Under foot the founding score
In a daze begun before
My fingers play in autumn

Turn the soil rich and brown
Spade and shovel dipper down
Shining on both cap and crown
My fingers play in autumn

Jewel be dangle limb for limb
Shaggy trunk from wide to thin
Hum of wonder gold within
My fingers play in autumn

Copyright Kkh 11/13/09

Poetal
Member

since 2009-11-09

Posts 74
Texas, United States

1 posted 2009-11-13 06:04 PM

I love the fall too and you capture the sights well in this well written poem.

Thanks for the good read.

AL Inmon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2009-11-13 08:35 PM

wow! that last line! fantastic!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2009-11-15 05:46 PM

K..I kept wanting to take autumn and make it
autum - n.........you color the leaves so
well...if it were not for your ever delightful
demeanor.....well........

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2009-11-15 07:55 PM

TD..."My fingers play in autumn"

I love this...the thought of it is just what I would say if I thought of saying it, because mine do too. Lovely you!!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2009-11-15 08:19 PM

kathleen
i just love your poetry

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