Open Poetry #45 |
Voice in the Light |
Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Voice in the Light Down the heavens, thru the clouds, across the winds that churn the night, the velvet darkness pins the sky with stars of a silvern light. At a gallop in the dark, the light rays come, first the fast, then behind come the slow. They both reach the eyes at slight different times and a Twinkle is their impacts aglow. In that blink, some men see their last Hope. In that flash, some men hear their Faith and a dim corner shows my old Courage lost now lit by this messenger of Space. And it seems that the Infinite is speaking to me, Man the infinitely small, that we are both the ends of a cosmic circle not touching but embracing us all and the unmeasured distance between us is the breath of a heartbeat’s sigh winged with a Voice from the velvet darkness locked in the twinkling of an eye. And in the silent and echoless vast uncertain dim of some darkened night when one star blinks and jumps great distance straddled to a cosmic light hurtling the blackness of a million midnights whose span is a chasmed sea, if you listen for the light, in the twinkling of an eye, it will speak to the dark in thee. Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes!! Your nightly stargazing inspires you beautifully and you capture the messages so well. Wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
This is a lovely write with good poetic form ne and fine rhythm and rhyme. The exspance of the heavens leaves one in amazement. Thanks for the great read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is poetry! Love it! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And in the silent and echoless vast uncertain dim of some darkened night when one star blinks and jumps great distance straddled to a cosmic light hurtling the blackness of a million midnights whose span is a chasmed sea, if you listen for the light, in the twinkling of an eye, it will speak to the dark in thee. Namyh, you certainly have the ability to become a great poet. That is very well written and a delight to read. Good luck. Lindsay |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita – It was indeed an inspirational starry night to receive a cosmic message. So very happy to capture this one for you. Thanks Margherita. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Poetal – It’s the reader who often amazes the poet and the poet who sometimes amazes the reader. They share a common amazement, especially when it comes from the expanse of the heavens. Thanks Poetal for sharing your enjoyment. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Passing Shadows – What poet could ask for a better declaration than that. I am honored. Thanks Passing Shadows. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Lindsay – Ahh Shucks Lindsay! Now you got me blushin’ all over the place. And I do feel better and luckier thanks to your wonderful words of enjoyment making the rewrites worth it. Now I’m inspired to create once again. Thanks Lindsay. Namyh |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I understand whereof ~ and whatof ~ you speak! Beautifully expresed! I thoroughly enjoyed your sharing of your epiphany! Love & Cosmic Light, EA |
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