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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
before this life in another place a promise most sacred was made two souls vowed to meet again whatever path one would take entering life terrestrial one before the next for kindred spirits a journey began oblivious to life’s context through the years each struggled in search of love and faith a mate she found and so did he they thought they had it made is this it? one would ask, is this the happy end? no my friend, brace yourself for their lovers played ‘pretend’ when he came to know the ugly truth of mistrust and contempt he wrote her a short and revealing note in the hope it all would end in an idle attempt to resurrect the love he thought he had two kindred souls were reunited and almost wished they never had ‘thank you for being here’, she said he replied ‘there was no ill intent’ .. you see my friend, although bittersweet this is the happy end |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is lovely and well written. If only it was easier to find each other again ...  Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
shalisadefa - felt your words when reading this writing, well done... BC |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
Deep thoughts of things one might imagine though unproven it was an interesting read. I always enjoy a story written poeticly. Thanks for the read AL Inmon |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
Bill Charles and Margherita, thank you for - again - taking your time to read my poem and to write such sweet comments. And to 'newcomer' poetal, thanks as well, I'll be taking a peek at your work asap. |
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