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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2009-11-10 03:20 AM


The leaves fall off a burdened tree
producing a fire at their feet.
The chill of Winter puts it out
Months of cold self discovery lie ahead.

With spring comes realization,
buds of new life and happiness.
Summer brings back old memories
that are now able to arise with out tears.

© Copyright 2009 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-10 05:07 PM


This is beautiful. A touch of melancholy and a touch of uplifting hope ...

What a radiant smile you have, girl!

Love,
Margherita

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2009-11-11 12:14 PM


Thank you!
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