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Open Poetry #45

My last first

tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

0 posted 2009-11-09 09:55 PM

Its been eight years
Since my last first
We've shared many tears
Some of joy
Some of pain
But not a single one
Would I ever take back
Because for every tear
There is a memory
Of a time we shared
Its been eight long years
since we shared our last
Our last first kiss

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-10 05:06 PM

quote:
But not a single one
Would I ever take back
Because for every tear
There is a memory
Of a time we shared

This is the right attitude.

Very nice.

Love,
Margherita

Mas814
Junior Member

since 2009-11-13

Posts 15
NY (not nyc)

2 posted 2009-11-13 06:56 PM

Very touching. Lasts are hard to deal with, but i like your approach to it coping.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2009-11-13 08:41 PM

nice one

I relate

tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

4 posted 2009-11-14 07:40 PM

thank you

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