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My Heart Keeps
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My Heart Keeps |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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My heart keeps What my lips fear to speak of it I would share My blessed joy With you I would make the gifts Upon my soul Gifts to yours Even as I long for this I grieve With my fear That the truth be told Would be heard Like madness To ears who’s Day had not yet dawned And they were not awake |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
What a wonderfully haunting and longing piece of work, Lori. But then I expected that as soon as I saw your name. Nicely crafted. Best regards jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks, Jim~L |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
Refreshing wit you have in prose. Thanks for the good read and warm words. AL Inmon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
haunting is the right term indeed much enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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