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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2009-11-09 02:13 PM



Caught again
Riding the fence
Between rights and wrongs
Waking up and wondering
Which way to go
Lost again
It doesn’t make sense to me
Don’t know what to believe anymore
Too many lies
Too many motives
Too many emotions
Too many
Woulda
Coulda
Shoulda
Hiding a forest
Somewhere in these trees
I went to find the goddess
In myself
To give it room to grow
And all I have found
Is the sadness
The fear
The lonely
The doubts
The all that
I am nots
Even the what I wases
Are gone
Still I believe
There is that
That I am
That would give
Sparkle to an eye
Joy to a heart
Longing to a touch
Recognition of spirit

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (11-09-2009 04:06 PM).]

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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-11-09 03:13 PM


The saga continues. A bittersweet chronicle of your ongoing search, Lori.  Beautiful.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2009-11-09 04:13 PM


Jim, I appreciate your comments.~L
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-11-09 06:04 PM


Nice...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-11-10 05:47 PM


recognition of spirit

When this happens, sometimes even a "reuniting of spirits", then we know true joy. May you continue to believe, in yourself above all.

Sadly eloquent write.

Love,
Margherita


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