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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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we clothed ourselves with conversations thinly covered in a film of dusty heat with no want of anyone to come along with feathers sweeping everything clean you laid there and talked to me about dreams and things I used my hands to picture them all over you you tasted like soft white and felt like soft white but I said man alive you're tan between breaths you breathed out a laugh I breathed it in because it was so much better than air and it breathed like soft white. ______________________________________ We'd be perfect if everything wasn't wrong, Tera. (Bad Habits.) I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Paul, another striking bad habit poem! The idea of breathing in the laughter is fantastic! Love, Margopargo  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks Margopargo. I kinda like this one. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very sensual in its play |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I love this kind of thing. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Okay. That was so good - that is it officially ridiculous! Just beautiful. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
TD (touchdown? terrific day?) ... thanks for reading. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
slowlyfallaway... I like that you love this kind of thing.  Aenea, thank you. Glad you continue to read my junk in the trunk. You flatter me. But seriously, I've got junk in the trunk. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like the soft white of conversation that you share with us. Thank you, poet friend, for sharing. Alison |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
always, alabee. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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