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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2009-11-06 07:09 PM


You left it all for a purpose
a ride through the circus
and a plan for your words
to fill awe in the mouths
of bystanders.

A packed bag, a gentle look
at your watch,
waiting for it to all come
to your knees, for it all to be beautiful.

For the riches to be yours,
the fame of a mans breeze
and a hot chocolate drink
below the snows feet.

It's all for a purpose,
a meaning to the hours,
wrinkles, sagging eye lids,
a meaning to the years that come and go,
and the world turns,
far to the east, you see it all,
you see it from your front porch,
standing in front of a sea of million.

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2009-11-10 08:48 AM


Tomer, this is an excellent piece of work. I  myself have scored touchdowns, been the singer in the number one band in history and saved the world, all in the view of millions of adoring fans.......and all while sitting on my porch, rocking gently.

Thank God for imagination....

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2009-11-10 07:23 PM


Appreciate the comments.  How wonderful it is to dream, and hopefully one day achieve.  Thanks for the response.  

Cheers

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