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tommy738
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since 2009-10-28
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0 posted 2009-11-04 09:09 PM



Such a small token
but the weight it can carry
can put a person at ease
who knew such a simple term
could do so much for me
Goodnight may mean little to you
but it ment the world to me
if even for just that one moment
goodnight was better
than I love you
tonight I went to sleep
with out being upset
tonight was a night
a real goodnight


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Gaia
1 posted 2009-11-04 10:38 PM


What a pleasant write!
Good night!

SlowlyFallAway
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North Carolina
2 posted 2009-11-05 09:50 AM


"goodnight was better
than I love you"


Great line. I guess I can relate.

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