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Open Poetry #45

Mona Lisa Smile

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2009-11-03 06:31 PM

Mona Lisa Smile

stroked
brushing sides
from outer shades
questionable surroundings
canvassed
demure colour, provoking
depths of a sincere center
stretching its release
finding outbreak
the corner of one's soul
a portrait in its own
ready to be stated
even at its slightest
   in sharing
   in baring
   in wearing

a masterpiece
Mona Lisa Smile

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-03 06:43 PM

Ctowen, it's a pleasure to see you posting and I loved your Mona Lisa Smile, especially

quote:
stretching its release
finding outbreak
the corner of one's soul

Great work, thank you.

Love,
Margherita

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

2 posted 2009-11-03 08:53 PM

Beautiful piece.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

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