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Between the Lines
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Between the Lines |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Read backwards from the final page Between the lines, decipher rage Break the silence with nonfiction Pen a whisper with conviction Burn a bridge by scrawling fire Conjured misfit truths inspire Eclipse a drama with reality Comfort lies in false formality A paper guise folds more in less A house of cards implies finesse Judge the cover by the fable Observe the facts beneath the label Induced to snare an alibi Censored faith burns paper lie Search relations with technique End a sinning winning streak Mirror a future in your past Or speak out first to be the last Read backwards from the final date Absolve your lines of reckless hate. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write... I love your rhymes! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Judge the cover by the fable Observe the facts beneath the label Great advice, and great poem! |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Wow, Kindredspirit, what a heavy karmic load to lay upon anyone! Strong work here, with more than a little anger glaring through. Nice work. Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Thankee very much. =] |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"mirror a future in your past" that goes deeper then one line loved it |
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