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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-11-02 01:43 PM


Only Of You

© Copyright 2009 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-11-02 01:54 PM


Bill, only a man with a bottomless heart and who in an incurable romantic (for which I hope there is no cure!!!) would be able to continue writing such spendiferous loving poetry over so many years. You are amazing! Every woman should be loved like this! ~ and I'd wager that you would be man enough for the job! Spread the love, you darling man!


Linda

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-11-02 03:26 PM


quote:
I sleep to dream of you in darkness
caressing unknown lips forbidden


Isn't that just so soothing and stirring in the same time? And may your dreams manifest, dear Bill, as you write with such passion and tenderness of them.

Loved this charming combination of picture and romantic words. You always bring smiles and appreciation with your emotion filled writes.

Love,
Margherita

suthern
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3 posted 2009-11-02 04:59 PM


You've written so many wonderful poems... but I think this may be the best yet!! So wonderfully romantic... I'm clicking the library button so I can read this again and again! *s*
2islander2
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4 posted 2009-11-03 04:39 AM


Bill, what a lovely piece of art, I enjoyed my read and the harmony of words and picture.

regards

yann

suthern
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5 posted 2009-11-03 08:11 AM


I'm blonde, Bill... can't help being an airhead at times. LOL

NOW I'm clicking on the library button! *S*

Ariana
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6 posted 2009-11-05 09:12 AM


BC

A soothing romantic piece of poetry.  The picture and the words blend nicely.  I really enjoyed.

Ariana

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2009-11-09 11:02 AM


Lovely, lilting and delicate to the senses
LindsayP
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8 posted 2009-11-10 09:53 PM



Hello old Cobber, I hope you are keeping well and writing plenty of your good poems.

This is the first one of yours that I have read for some time. A very passionate poem Bill that I thoroughly enjoyed. Take are.

Lindsay

passing shadows
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9 posted 2009-11-10 10:08 PM


well dear Bill, now that I have my satellite internet, I will have to catch up.

This one loaded like a dream! And beautifully written!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2009-11-10 10:52 PM


Linda - you are a sweetheart with your words of graciousness...

Margherita - I'm very glad you stop by to read my poetry, and reply to them as you do...

suthern - a very nice compliment, I'll try and keep these poems coming...

yann - glad you enjoyed this one...

suthern - h'mmmm, two replies, very nice. You may be blond, but not an airhead...

Ariana - always nice to see you here, appreciate your words...

ThisDiamond - precious words you write, thank you...

LindsayP - doing my best to stay healthy, and doing some writing. Nice to see you again...

passing shadows - good to hear this loaded ok for you. More to come...

BC

Poetal
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11 posted 2009-11-10 11:58 PM


Great read and good poetic form. Enjoyed the photo as well as it adds to the work. Thanks for the read.

AL

AL Inmon

nourzihane
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12 posted 2009-11-12 12:47 PM


Dear Bill

I feel happy when I reply or when I comment
because realy your topic is very nice especially your image
I always enjoy wiht your sweet words
thank you my dear Bill

hug
Norzihane

Lamar Cole
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13 posted 2009-11-13 02:10 AM


Very nice poem.
suthern
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14 posted 2009-11-21 03:48 PM


I needed another visit with this beauty. *S*
Klassy Lassy
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15 posted 2009-11-21 04:37 PM


The entire poem is so warmly aspiring, but the last lines fall to the intimate tenderness of lasting love.  So beautiful, the brush of colors and dream manifesting.

Karen

Osprey
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16 posted 2009-11-22 01:16 AM


I feel a forbidden love in your words, and that is the saddest love of all.
Magnus
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17 posted 2009-11-22 11:40 AM


When you go into that other place...surely
there will be a bevy of beautiful women
crying...but that won't be for at least
another half century....God wants to read
it while you are still kicking, not then....

rosepetals25
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18 posted 2009-12-03 12:08 PM


It has been a long long time since I've stopped in.  Glad to see your writing is just as beautiful as ever.

--Tara

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