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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2009-06-21 03:48 PM

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I notice her teeth
Are no better than mine

Summer rain


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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-06-22 12:09 PM

Yes i believe that if a man has bad teeth and he finds out the girl he is interested also has bad teeth then that would be a satori

Thanks for the Read

Yoin
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-06-22 10:03 AM

Yo John,

This is a very wise poem.  It's all in the teeth.

Bobby
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