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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-10-29 02:34 PM

When all things are sweet,
when all sentiments are up between us,
there is this inside little bubbble
inside me that keeps asking :
Why things are the way they are ?
why are you so nice and sweet ?
Is it the way it has to be ?
I gently poke the little voice
and the little bubble pronounces :
I don’t like things the way they are,
but this little voice can’t stop visiting me
when I love you like no one else,
and the little bubble whispers inside me:
Why I love this girl ? is she so special ?
and I have just an answer,
I am a little confused with this question
so drive me girl, drive me young girl
the road is not easy with you
but without you there is no road.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-10-29 02:49 PM

This is so tenderly romantic, dear Yann. I have dreamy music on my ears right now and I tell you it is the perfect accompaniment to your beautiful words of love.
Everything is all right when you know you love her, don't let the little voice distract you. Enjoy the route with her and live this love.

Going to read it again, it's really captivating!

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-10-29 06:00 PM

If you love her, she IS special. *S* Sometimes, it's hard to believe our good luck. *S* Enjoyed this!!

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

3 posted 2009-10-30 08:37 AM

Hello, Yann: I am with Margherita on this one: very nicely put, all the way through. A word of caution, though: if you have perfection, don't poke it! If it is not perfection, accept it.
Very good and captivating write, Yann.
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-10-30 08:28 PM

Sometimes, we can think love to death. Go with the flow and enjoy it! She must be very special if she has earned your love!

A precious write from your loving heart. Now, please, put your inquiring mind to rest.

The heart knows!

Love to you, my dear Frenchy Friend,
Linda

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