Open Poetry #45 |
A Lipstick Smudge |
rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I put lipstick on today, along with eye make up and foundation. Anyway. I kissed a piece of paper, and wrote this short poem on it. A Lipstick Smudge A kiss of true love A gift from above For my one true love Is more than just A lipstick smudge Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the thought that counts, and this is just as sweet as can be.. but yea, love is more than that, then again isn't it love that's behind the idea!! Nice~ |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thanks, Blues. And you're absolutely right. It is love that is the idea behind it. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Rachael, this is cute and lovely, I loved the lipstick smudge. regards yann |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Rachael - It does a heart good to know it's more than a lipstick smudge. But it can relish a lipstick smack anytime. I like this Rachael. It's poignant. Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very romantic and so true. Love, Margherita |
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tommy738 Junior Member
since 2009-10-28
Posts 33 |
What I wouldnt give to wake up to something so simple yet so touching. Things like that would make this grown man tear at its sight |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all very much. My girlfriend, Tonia, loved it, but called me a goofball at the same time. But I'm HER goofball, and that's what counts. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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