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naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England

0 posted 2009-10-27 08:31 PM


A small word,softly spoken
tentatively given credence by your
graciously given gifts of love.
Given to delight me,excitedly
deposited in my holding place,
to share and remember together.
Days wandering on beaches and
windswept moors,flasks of tea
hot,sweet,like our love.
Memories of sadness, long gone
swept away by your caring,
calming,caresses,I am shipwrecked
Marooned hopelessly on the beach
of your love,footprints washed
clean by crashing, crescendo,waves
throwing us gasping,soaked, sinking
together into our shared oblivion...



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Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2009-10-28 09:31 AM


This is truly a written devotion of love...
martiniat8
Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-10-28 10:11 AM


lucky guy, sounds like someone you can trust, and a very good poem, well expressed and moving
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-10-28 01:03 PM


enjoyed this one NG..hits the nail on both ends
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