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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow

0 posted 2009-10-27 09:54 AM



Some commuters
drive for
     m     i     l     e     s
out of their way,
wasting
time and money,
to avoid
Squeegee corners:
the penalty of guilt.

Others pay,
avoiding eye contact,
looking.......straight.......ahead,
afraid
the gunge
of the Squeegee's rag
may damage Audi shine.
They reinforce
the efficacy of intimidation
as a social grace.

The global village
has come of age,
as this phenomena,
indigenous once
solely to third world cities,
has come to
Main Street,
and urban crowding
makes
the sale of fear
a career of necessity
to those
we continue to
                                                 ignore.

From "Anger in the Street" series

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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1 posted 2009-10-27 11:20 AM


AH..sometimes they follow to closely to the leather man on the Harley and his chewing tobacco spatters their bimmer glass..they hurry then to the squeegee kids corner...

(the window crew splits proceeds with me to keep me redman) kidding...but might be a new line of work for me..  enjoyed this one

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2 posted 2009-10-27 03:52 PM


We don't avoid them at all actually.  My son has a favorite he drives by to help him out.  You are so right though, I have watched people in their cars, roll up windows, be rude, when a simple, "No thank you," would have done.
AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
3 posted 2009-10-28 12:36 PM


DS and Mysteria:  Thank you, dear readers, for your comments.  Very best regards to you both.
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

4 posted 2009-10-29 06:51 PM


A nice addition to the anger in the street series.
We don't have this problem out in cow country. Hell, we don't even have streets to be angry in.
I like your writes AH.

AncientHippie
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5 posted 2009-10-30 08:28 AM


Thank you, GBride.  Your comments are always appreciated.
Best regards,
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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