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Namyh
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0 posted 2009-10-26 05:55 PM



The Poet

The Poet, as master of creation, sculpts with words from ideation.
A poetic human Lens under Sun
who must concentrate its rays and in bold exquisite ways
tug the Heart and pluck its strings, one by one.

In a foxhole, words of Courage, out in Space, words of Hope,
on a deathbed, poet's words to feel alive
are the jewels within a chest from the heart and head and breast
of a poet's driven quest to pen the scribe.

And even when 'no inspiration' is the poet's root frustration
and no wind to make a flag of words unfurl,
Time will tilt the Lens to daylight
bending words to pinpoint insight
and one breath will hurl that scribe across the world.

So embrace the Poet's mission, as you write with proud submission
to this self imposed commission that occurs.
So that when you speak of Beauty, Love and Death, Truth and Duty,
you'll make Shakespeare smile with tears and lose his words.

Namyh


© Copyright 2009 Namyh - All Rights Reserved
rachaelfuchsberger
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1 posted 2009-10-26 05:59 PM


A truly moving, and inspiring piece.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

AncientHippie
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2 posted 2009-10-26 06:07 PM


Well Namyh, you've certainly told it like it is in this insightful piece.  Some nice turns of phrase herein.  Enjoyed it very much.

Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment:  The Complete Sutras

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-10-27 02:26 PM


This is a sharp "analysis" of the Poets' work.

Insightful and endearing.

Love,
Margherita


Namyh
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4 posted 2009-10-27 10:34 PM


Rachael – We should all receive a little inspiration in our lives each day. Glad I was able to add to yours as you have added to mine. Namyh
Namyh
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5 posted 2009-10-27 10:35 PM


Hope it helps when most needed. I tried to write it from the heart. Thanks AH. Namyh
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6 posted 2009-10-27 10:37 PM


Margherita – I hope it put a smile on you along with some insight to remember. Thanks for your words. Namyh
threadbear
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7 posted 2009-10-28 12:38 PM


Splendid writing, and I LOVE the premise that the quality of the poem should do the subject justice.
Tbear

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8 posted 2009-10-29 09:32 AM


How very beautiful... into my library this goes! *S*
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2009-10-29 02:19 PM


Wow! That was great! Talk about a feel good!  Only a poet could have written that. thank you so much.
Namyh
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10 posted 2009-10-30 12:37 PM


Tbear – To have a premise, to ensure quality and to do the subject justice is a tough job. But somebody’s got to do it and I guess we poets just love the burden. Thanks Tbear for your splendid enjoyment. Namyh
Namyh
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11 posted 2009-10-30 12:38 PM


suthern – You made me so very happy that I kept my library card. I’m honored indeed that this piece qualifies for the “S” library. Now, that’s beautiful. Thanks suthern. Namyh
Namyh
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12 posted 2009-10-30 12:39 PM


Lori – Now you got me feelin’ good and that’s great. Only a poet could appreciate this with a poet’s eye. I thank you for your enjoyment and for that “Wow”. Namyh
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2009-10-30 07:21 PM


Namyh ~

I am a fan of your writing, dear Poet! ~ and this one is especially appealing to me. I am safely tucking this poem into my treasure trove of poems about poets and poetry! Thank you!!!



Love & Poet Light,

Linda

Namyh
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14 posted 2009-10-30 10:03 PM


Linda – Not only am I elated that you found this especially appealing. But I’m totally honored to be safely tucked in a treasure trove by a fan. It’s a warm experience and I thank you very much for it. It could only have been granted by an angel of Earth who makes Shakespeare lose his words. Namyh

P.S. – Somebody get me a Kleenex. Make it two. Oh, gimme the box. LOL

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