this sky is full of truths

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2009-10-26 02:52 AM

this sky is full of truths,
clouds can talk and knit
fairy tales above the long horizon,
birds teach freedom to the look,
everywhere they are, everywhere they sing,
it's such a lovely example,
they are so good at dreaming in winter,
this sky is full of truths,
shares sadness with its greys,
shares lucky friendship with it rainbows,
with happy fellows that drunk the rain,
it is silly to work when it's sunny,
sky shows a vastness of orange passions and blue,
this sky is full of truths.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (10-26-2009 12:22 PM).]

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2009-10-26 02:59 AM

Ive got song birds in my head and heart too, this eve

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2009-10-26 05:33 AM

dear Yann.. this is oh so nice!! I love clouds, they hold such beauty within them.. when I fly to Paris I like to think the clouds hold my parents spirits in them and that makes me feel so much closer to them.. thank you for sharing your thoughts of truth with us.

Bisous de Sydney
RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

3 posted 2009-10-26 08:50 AM

Very strong work, Yann. This poem, as well as the sky, is full of truths, beautifully captured, and finely wrought. Wispy and whimsical while yet profound and moving. Great read.
Jim

Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment: The Complete Sutras

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-10-26 11:53 AM

A write after my own heart, dear Yann. Delightful and captivating. And truths indeed are revealed while gazing at the sky and absorbing the filtered infinity.

Contemplations such as these can be indeed extremely rewarding. Work can wait ... for a while.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-10-27 03:28 AM

The sky is very beautiful through your eyes, yann.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

6 posted 2009-10-27 04:36 AM

Thanks Martiniat for the sharing comment, interruption is mysterious.

regards

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

7 posted 2009-10-27 04:37 AM

Hello Roniece, I love your sharing thoughts, this is enlighning.

regards

yann

2islander2
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by the sea

8 posted 2009-10-27 04:39 AM

Hello AH, your comment is graceful and appropiate, I find charms in whimsical and light poetry. I like alternating (is it english) in style and subjects...Thanks again for the beautiful comment.

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

9 posted 2009-10-27 04:40 AM

thanks margherita for the deep and hidden humour of your comment. You are so fair and share a lot.

regards

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

10 posted 2009-10-27 04:41 AM

Thanks Ida for reading and commenting gracefully.

yann

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