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Just Like Me |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I am not a beast nor man Don't attempt to comprehend It will take your whole life span Even when you've reached the end You will find there's more to know than you possibly can Because you are just a man, I you will not comprehend I am but an entity Being of another plane Past your simple sanity You would have to be insane To comprehend the extent of my complexity Beast and man are all made from all the same dust and grain I am both beast and man Though I am an entity I am both because I can Shocking the simplicity With which I have the double nature of ev'ry man You are both a beast and man and so an entity ... Arana Darkwolf |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
really really good read! |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you, martinia. Arana Darkwolf |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I liked it too!~L |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you, Lori. Arana Darkwolf |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Nicely written, Rachel. You are operating in my headspace now, and I can see by this delectable piece that you have been there before. Great read. Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thanks, Jim. I've been going through a lot of rough stuff lately, and it's got my wheels spinning. Arana Darkwolf |
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