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Chaotic_Soul
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since 2009-10-23

Posts 8
Leon, GTO, Mexico

0 posted 2009-10-23 10:37 PM

Hey everyone! Well I started writing poetry not that long ago... and just starting to get the hang of things. Here are 2 poems that i wrote these past few days.

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Cycle of Torment
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Waves crashing intensely

Against the rocky shore

Never succeeding to escape

The immortal grasp the the sea

To and fro, continuously teased

A little taste of freedom

Then hopelessly dragged back

Imprisoned

In this never ending cycle

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Garden of Thoughts
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In this garden you will not find

The many flowers and greens that grow

Nor the many lingering creatures

That wander aimlessly about

In this garden there exists

A festivity of colorful reflections

Rushing about, here and there

Never pausing for slumber

This garden needs no sun or water

For it lives off of the mundane

And transforms it into creativity

The hopes and dreams that dwell there

In my garden of thoughts

[This message has been edited by Chaotic_Soul (10-24-2009 11:18 AM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-10-24 05:23 AM

quote:
In this garden there exists

A festivity of colorful reflections

Rushing about, here and there

Never pausing for slumber

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

I enjoyed your two first offerings very much.

To give the poems due attention I suggest you post only one at a time.

I can tell you love to write.

Love,
Margherita

Chaotic_Soul
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since 2009-10-23

Posts 8
Leon, GTO, Mexico

2 posted 2009-10-24 11:06 AM

I very much do. I hope that I can continue to improve. It's a shame that some people don't value poetry...

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

3 posted 2009-10-24 04:25 PM

Welcome to PiP!

Arana Darkwolf

[This message has been edited by Ron (10-26-2009 11:27 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2009-10-24 06:41 PM

Welcome! I enjoyed reading both your offerings, and encourage you to keep pen and paper handy!
I like the idea of 'mundane' but beautiful garden items.

Chaotic_Soul
New Member

since 2009-10-23

Posts 8
Leon, GTO, Mexico

5 posted 2009-10-24 10:23 PM

I only posted 3 poems anyways...

"A poet's autobiography is his poetry. Anything else is just a footnote" -Yevgeny Yevtushenko

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-10-26 11:34 AM

I enjoyed both of these very much... Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine

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7 posted 2009-10-26 12:07 PM

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2009-10-26 01:34 PM

Good stuff! I'm liking it and looking forward to what else you have up your sleeve~L

Chaotic_Soul
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since 2009-10-23

Posts 8
Leon, GTO, Mexico

9 posted 2009-10-26 03:38 PM

Sunshine-

Thanks so much

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