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way of sighs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you would do that thing with your breathing sometimes like you had it all running away and were chasing and then your eyes would look away for a moment as if my eyes were wanting to steal their glances my leather was anxious I will admit, when touching against your finger tip curiosity on purpose hoping you would want more than one handful and would keep reaching until you were satisfied you said yes repeatedly to my questions after and laughed that I kept on asking even more often just to hear the sounds you would make from inside and watch your mouth do things with ends of words like they were almost a perfect size to bite on but the chills along your neck made you taste longer before you let them glisten the brim of your laughter and then you just said you were almost ready again when I kissed your wrist and found your heart _____________ daark (way of sighs) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D-breathtaking (as always)You never cease to amaze~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms LG, humble thanks for the glance lady friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no words for this one D just sighs. I do so love listening to your sigh songs |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A heart sigh if I ever.... you know...breathed!! Hugs and lovies, and all that!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe ____________ ms bluezy...dare you to say that to me in person? thanks hon |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and watch your mouth do things with ends of words like they were almost a perfect size to bite on I love these lines... and the last... as they engage both mind and heart. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks special lady for the reviews. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have such a refined way of causing sighs. Playful and stirring with a conclusion that would melt the toughest girl. Wonderful. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Liking this, Daark. Ali-san |
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Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Very nice. It brings to mind some very interesting pictures that only your words seem able to describe. I heard about your work the other night and thought I'd check it out. You totally bypass in quality all that I heard. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of it. ~Dreamer05~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks special lady for the eyes _____________ ms ali-san, thank you little one for looking in on this. _______________ dreamer..humble thanks to you for the review I am blessed by your comments |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Strength to strength, DS: that is your Dharma. I love the line "...and watch your mouth do things with ends of words.." Masterful, amigo, my bandana is off to you. Jim Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak. |
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