Open Poetry #45 |
Against the Wall |
AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
The crypt coldness of the alley walls always bothered her even more than the bad breath of her furtive clients. Her thin shoulders were bruised and scraped by the bricks, as the speed of fiscal passion abraded foreplay. Her working clothes were a hentai fantasy, short, with slits and scoop, and a mile of leg disappearing into leather micro. Her eyes held that look of reflective knowledge found only in the better work of a few Dutch Masters. The mind-place she visited while working was an old friend from a lost childhood: a place to which she continued to be drawn, even after learning her test was positive. Sutra 2: Reflection is not solely that which we see in the mirror of Now, but is also the contemplation of why that image is. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your eyes are wise AH~L |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am glad I stopped in to read. I like the edge and the description of a world that I know so little about. The analogy to the Dutch Masters was excellent. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello A H your poem is full of emotions specially at the ending, the conclusion recalls us how frienship is essential. Thanks for the very touching poem. yann |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Lori, Alison, and Yann: A pleasure to write for you. Thank you so much. Namaste Sutra 3: See your reality for what it is, not for what you think it is: this is the first step to making your reality what you wish it to be. |
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