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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow

0 posted 2009-10-17 09:02 AM



This is from my "Anger in the Street" series.

The Library was her refuge:
through her thick lenses
she travelled far beyond
these sordid streets.
She lunched
with Byron and Yeats,
held off dervishes
with Gordon.
She was a true Bene Gesserit,
a Reverend Mother
of some note.

In the litter planted park
the Ten cursed and fought,
discussing,
monosyllabic,
the direction the evening
should take.
Their oversized clothing,
with uniform drabness,
prompted visions
of children
playing dress-up
in the rainy-day attic of a kinder world.

They surrounded
and devoured her
with their contrived anger.
Broken glasses,
scattered books,
ripped pages, lay mute
in the mud.

Her broken body
was serene and regal:
somewhen
the Sisterhood
mourned the passing
of a respected colleague,
and, at the siege of Khartoum,
Gordon fought on,
alone.


Sutra 2: Reflection is not solely that which we see in the mirror of Now, but is also the contemplation of why that image is.
--Jim's Guide to Enligh

© Copyright 2009 James D. Fanning - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2009-10-17 09:20 AM


AH a saturday evening post of ghosts in black and white.  A pleasure to look in and then look away.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2009-10-17 04:19 PM


AH-
It is so like a wreck, you can't help but look. You know I like your view of the dirt.~L

GBride
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3 posted 2009-10-17 10:22 PM


What a mind you have!!!
I,m jealous!!!

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-10-18 03:56 AM


enjoyed to read and share this poem and its images and persons.

regards

yann

AncientHippie
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5 posted 2009-10-18 08:15 PM


Dark Stranger, Lori, GBride, and 2islander2:  Many thanks for your kind remarks.  This piece is one from my series "Anger in the Street."  I consider each poem in the series a black ant white snapshot of the cold reality of the Street.  Very astute, DS and Lori.
Namaste

Sutra 3: See your reality for what it is, not for what you think it is: this is the first step to making your reality what you wish it to be.
--Jim's

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6 posted 2009-10-19 09:25 AM


Very powerful write... welcome to Passions!
Mysteria
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7 posted 2009-10-20 02:43 PM


A powerful picture of a very stark reality.  Well done, and by the way, welcome to Passions.  I am really enjoying your work.
martiniat8
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8 posted 2009-10-20 05:14 PM


Amazing write,

And Gordan fights on...
Alone

AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
9 posted 2009-10-21 08:29 AM


Suthern:  Thank you. I feel that, in Passions, I have found my way home.
Mysteria:  So very glad to be here.  Thank you so much.
Martiniat8:  Pleased and honoured that you enjoyed this work. Thank you.
Namaste
Jim

Sutra 6: If your Path seems to be sprinkled with shards of glass, you should examine each shard to ensure it is not a diamond.

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