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Singing to Snow
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Singing to Snow |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Singing to Snow Fall again upon my waiting tongue Abruptly change songs autumn sung You come too soon, too soon to sleep The snuggled warmth of hearth to keep Evolutionary white and boundless drifts that overtake The seeming of an empty landscape lay awake Float again upon my garden bright Drench with luminary stars of ice chips by their rite For I am out of meter, empty of the summer sun Expressive of the grace encircling and so hard won And I will dance delight to see again the soft of white For this I know, again the snow will fall And I will greet with face and feet, in wonder still and all Copyright Kkh 10/16/09 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"For I am out of meter, empty of the summer sun Expressive of the grace encircling and so hard won" Fine lines, Kathy. For me, the taste of the first snow was always a thrill! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Personally don't see anything wrong with your 'meter' but then I even fail at getting it right with the parking 'meter'...but I loved it...(your meter that is) j. |
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