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Like the Wynter Needs the Spring (Q chall)
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Like the Wynter Needs the Spring (Q chall) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Like the Wynter Needs the Spring I play across their minds each day In comfort of the words they say. Adventuring the out of in. Tomorrow's try: a new begin. Although at times they go astray I play across their minds each day To teach within from heart and soul Those little ones in my control. Reflecting on their love of all I hold them up, to never fall. I play across their minds each day And often tears I wipe away. Like Wynter needs the Spring each year To feel the warmth to persevere. To lift those thoughts that on me weigh, I play across their minds each day. M (Wynter) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep playing across their minds, and lifting their eyes beyond those day-to-day mishaps. This is a very uplifting write, Maureen. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I can just imagine, that they learn well from you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you're the best. I'm sure you love those classrooms... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love this...now whats the structure to follow...I may even try it (of course I always fail when I try to write structured... guess my head just grew the wrong way...still Loved this piece , would like to maybe fall on my face while trying it out (heck, I haven't been hurt good in a long time....ha!) jimmy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautifully done! Loved the theme of this one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write, dear lady... keep playing across their minds... and may your spring come soon! *S* |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love the rhyming on this one, Maureen. And the spelling of 'wynter' to me is always a cool thing. No pun intended. |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
I love the formal style you have given this work: it seems so appropriate to the content. A most thought-provoking piece, describing with elegance what all parents go through. Sutra 4: Do not expect your Path to be smooth. It will have rocks, slippery portions, and parts that are washed away completely. Persevere. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks everyone~~sorry I haven't been around much but between teaching and then freezing at the Renaissance Faire lately (we had an early snow and very low temps) I am just too worn out. Hoping for some more normal October weather.  M...and I used the Wynter spelling because that was the name I used associated with this poetry site way back when  |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
splendid, as always, Maur. The unique way you phrase is always a welcome sight. I went to a Renaissance fair once, but they had it a week later, and the field was used for paintball. I went ahead and stayed and played paintball- never got to see a single set of tights. Go figger Take your hug from me, Jeff |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
excellent.I am sure you are well loved by the little ones. latearrival |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful writing Maureen, you're ending is just so beautiful. Reminds me of my daycare. What a difference those little angels made in my life. hugs~ |
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