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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-10-15 06:37 PM


Sometimes In a Lifetime

This word
that men sometimes use
called magnificent,
this lovely word
that flows so delightfully
from the palate,
formed and assembled by inner thoughts
living within a mans heart.
The presence of a womans grace,
the essense of her personality,
words that flow freely & easily,
and sometimes in a lifetime
a man finds himself
using this word magnificent,
not to signify
nor to insinuate
that the woman appears to be
a specimen of perfection,
but more clearly to say
that in a sky full of stars
she is wonderful,
she is fabulous,
she is the special one
that he has noticed.

JamesLee
15October
2009




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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2009-10-15 08:19 PM


well I think it is wonderful to have someone think of another like that~~


M

2islander2
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by the sea
2 posted 2009-10-18 04:08 AM


hello James, i like this vibrant and deserved homage to love.

yann

rachaelfuchsberger
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3 posted 2009-10-18 01:17 PM


I enjoyed this one, James. Some men don't realize how much those singular words of praise can mean. Somehow, I  get the feeling you're not one of those men.

Arana Darkwolf

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