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Open Poetry #45

my world

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-10-14 12:10 PM

I walked through the shafts of heat
with the angels watching over me
the way my mother use to watch
me put my boots on.

I walked on the islands water,
my reflection starting off the suns rays
and I walked so fluidly
the mountains scaled their green backs
watching me as I neared closer.

I could feel what it felt like,
To be in utter control
pulling the strings of the waves
so I could watch the sharks play
even if I couldn't join, I felt the speed of it all,

The view of an island
Beneath my feet,
through the shafts of heat
with the Angels that I will soon greet.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-10-14 02:52 PM

I could feel what it felt like,
To be in utter control
pulling the strings of the waves
so I could watch the sharks play
even if I couldn't join, I felt the speed of it all,
___________

I always enjoy the images you write..

it's always like an adventure

hafrock
Junior Member

since 2009-10-10

Posts 34
India

2 posted 2009-10-14 03:53 PM

Colorful, images running in front..loved reading it..

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2009-10-16 12:19 PM

Appreciate the comments.

Cheers

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