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You'll Never Make It To Minnesota If You Don't Try.
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You'll Never Make It To Minnesota If You Don't Try. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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It might be worth the drive or flight for a weekend full of amazing. What do they say? Yes... Age is only a number. We could take a trip to somewhere where we wouldn't be important. Where age wouldn't be important. I could show you how to build a fire, a tent, in the real northwoods. We could listen to the wolves at night and the grouse drum in the morning. The trees are greener there. Greener than anywhere else. _____________________________________ The S Word. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~see, paulie... i told you it was a poem in itself ~kisses~ wow... |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I'd never have known if you hadn't told me. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you must have girls lined up around the block  |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Now I don't know about girls around each corner, but I have heard the grouse drum in the morning. This is quite the wonderful write, a journey for any age I would think. A poem which stands out. Heart2Heart |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
SEA... Not true. Every couple months I meet one that looks promising, but there's always something amiss, and we don't date. :P Heart... It is a wonderful thing. Thank you. -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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