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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
I was hungry i cried, She was there to feed me I was cold i cried, She was there to warm me I was alone i cried She was there to comfort me I was hated i cried She was there to love me I had pain i cried She was there to pacify me I was lost i cried She was there to guide me I was wronged, i cried She was there to back me I've lost her now, i cry And none out there can console me |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
hafrock, A mothers place can never be taken by any other... But all of us here are family... We will all be here to help you out... We are all there for you... To console you and listen to you... You're not alone... I know how it feels to lose someone you love... But then she would want you to be happy... The first step is to open up... And that you have done...  These dark hours will all pass on... Stay strong... condolences... Priyanka P.S you've written well...to put thoughts into words P.S.S mail me if you feel like sharing anything... Take care... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hafrock, Welcome to Passions! The loss of any parent is very frustrating, very disturbing, and only our best memories sustain us over time. I look forward to reading more from you. Again, Welcome, and check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and welcome to our pages blue... Your Mom is still with you in spirit and will guide you thru your grief.. be strong. Your first poem with us was very much enjoyed.. I hope to read more from you. Bisous de Sydney RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Hafrock, This poem is well arranged and put together. Bobby |
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micecollector Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 18Kansas -USA |
This poem is well done. It's so true there is no one who can take the place of a mother. In God we trust and one nation under God |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thnx priyanka...tat really meant a lot to me. |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thnx priyanka...tat really meant a lot to me. |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thnx priyanka...tat meant a lot to me. |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thank you sunshine...feel at home here..thanx for the grretings too |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thank you sunshine...feel at home here..thanx for the grretings too |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thank you Roniece...still feel she's with me |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thank you Robert...tats inspiring |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thanx mc..really luv you all guys |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
The love of her child is the most precious thing a mother can recieve. To have a child that sees a mother's precious love in her "daily routine" of mothering is blessed. I enjoyed your plain spoken truth. Even in your sorrow, remember you are still a source of great joy. Look forward to more from you. If I might be so bold as to ask....what is the other haf? |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thanq Lori, i feel after all that she's done for me i have done nothing for her..she went off so soon.. Yeah the other part of haf is a three letter word which completes my name |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I share in your sentiments hafrock, nicely worded and very true. Take care during this difficult time, and welcome to Passions. Best wishes, /Kit |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Welcome to pip! I hope that you will be well and know that we are willing to hear your inner heart. Your poem was sweet, many of us have lost someone..which is why you have us for support Be well Hafrock. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
well written and a generous meaning. thanks for the poem. yann |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Thank you Kit, Ken and islander..i never expected this much of response..makes me feel stronger |
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dragngrl28 Junior Member
since 2009-10-12
Posts 45Texas, USA |
I teared up at the end of the poem. Mothers mean so much and the loss of a mother is a terrible thing to go through. I wanted to ask why you chose to use smaller case 'i' in the poem. Was this intentional and a means of accentuating how much your mother means? I find the choice interesting. |
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