Open Poetry #45 |
Never Love Only Me! |
anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Never Love Only Me! Black is the night, but all I see is sunshine, blue is the only thing, I see in your eyes music I hear, when you speak to me only I know, that you exist in the dark starlight has never seemed so wonderful as it dances on your skin with delight the moon shines in your raven black hair your eyes shine like a sky full of sun rays never in my dreams did I chance to meet the wonder of a creature such as you love seeks you out where ever you may be to surely melt the hearts of man or beast no man can resist your wild seductive charms as love always seek you, and holds you in it's arms. Annie 9-10-2009 [This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (10-10-2009 12:58 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a pleasure to read your heartspeak ms |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you very much I appreciate you reading it... |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Quite romantic, flows well, a well conceived and executed piece. Please write some more like this!!! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I enjoyed this very much |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Thank you G Bride that's lovely of you to say so... brneyedgrly thank you for your feed back it is much appreciated |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Oh Annie.. what a pleasure to read! I love your writing style.. you hold such talent in your pen... very much enjoyed! love and bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
Awww Thank you RDB that's lovely of you to say so |
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