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Open Poetry #45
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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
0 posted 2009-10-07 06:41 AM

I closed my my eyes for a while
congregated conversed

traveled, for a while

with whom I can't remember
what was done
what was said

and I open my eyes
finding 2 hours have passed by

in the same conversation
leaving me with the same thoughts and reasons

I had when I left

having moved nowhere, lost

having traveled...
in my bed
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sweetthing21
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since 2009-09-05
Posts 23
1 posted 2009-10-07 12:39 PM

loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
2 posted 2009-10-07 07:10 PM


hey brad

was this a dream

or a fugue?

lol

I always enjoy your stuff  


martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-10-07 10:23 PM

I don't know what it was, that's why I wrote about it. But it wouldn't surprise me if it was a fugue, it was no dream, wasn't anything like my dreams. There were quite a few people there and I usually remember details about my dream. Whatever it was seems to still be an unresolved issue.
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