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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-10-06 07:54 PM



Keepsakes from our togetherness,
objects to ignite the
candle flame memory and
take our thoughts back
to moments of warmth
shared in elements wild
and beautiful, carefree and
precious, but always loving.
Stars in deep country,
snow and waves by
coastal cliffs in winter.
Shells,acorns, yew needles,
music bands, smooth pebbles,
reminders of travel in
our night recalled eyesight,
we relive to deliver
us to the doorway
of dreamworld, easing hearts
with loves salubrious balm.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-10-06 08:52 PM


Boy this makes me feel all warm and cozy!!
You sure do write awful nice, Goldenrose~

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-10-07 05:38 AM


Very beautiful, dear Phil! These are rich memories and they bring radiance into the now.

Love,
Margherita

naturegirl
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England
3 posted 2009-10-07 09:00 AM


Thank you Goldenrose for writing such a beautiful poem....
Poetry101web
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4 posted 2009-10-07 11:40 AM


I live by coastal cliffs in winter so really liked that image.  It is an evocative work that seems to be full of memory.  Very nice.
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5 posted 2009-10-10 02:04 AM


Thank you for writing and sharing magic.  I read this earlier and have thought of it throughout my day.  It's a true keeper.

Alison

brneyedgrly
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6 posted 2009-10-10 12:27 PM



I always read when I see your name

and am never disappointed!




naturegirl
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England
7 posted 2009-11-16 08:13 AM


my red bowl would like some new companions...
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2009-12-11 04:27 PM


red is always my favorite color...but you know that anyway!

Hope your Thanksgiving was happy! and a Merry Christmas to you!

Buffalo Girl

The Lady
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The Southwest
9 posted 2009-12-12 08:41 PM




wonderful images here


secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
10 posted 2009-12-13 05:46 PM


most pleasant interplay of imagery and Romanticism!

love those candle-flame memories!

sustained applause for this 'penning' !!

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