Open Poetry #45 |
Too Soon |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Too soon has summer shed her green Too soon has life denied a dream Too rapidly the winter comes Too willingly the heart succumbs Too fast the moments pass us by Too short our life, too soon to die The fleeting days I don’t lament I only grieve how they were spent Elizabeth Santos |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Too soon! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So many times we have this feeling of "Too Soon" and you rendered it well, but I am soooooo sure that your days are spent well, dear Elizabeth. You see, today you shared this beauty with us and there is joy in this sharing as we can relate. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We still are embraced by the sun, but I can't imagine a more beautiful place than where you are in the fall? Even a short walk in those surroundings would warm the coldest soul. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Indeed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Too true! Thanks and God bless, -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elizabeth - it does go by 'too soon'... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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