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dickpoetry Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 89 |
DANTE IN REVERSE it's happening, i think so, i feel it, the opening, the liberation, what i need most these days and dark nights, liberation, escape from the inner enslavement, the influx of air, breath, the dialogue, oscar wilde said all marriage is communication, de profundis, yes, the private hells and cells we are locked away in, i need out! so, yes, i am so relieved to have found this new passageway. the minotaur was too much, honestly. i'd wrestled with him too long. now, out and up, from the cave, into the sunlight. kudos to plato and his team of men who drag us out from the shadows. all such conceits, i know. be patient with me. i am fumbling for words. lines, ideas. i used to be much better at this. dickpoetry past midnight near the sea 10/3/9 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, Dick! Welcome aboard the PiP Ship Lollipip" as I affectionately refer to this sea of blue pages!  I noted that you wrote this after midnight. ~ "the minotaur was too much, honestly. i'd wrestled with him too long." ~ Yeppers! Those minotaurs can certainly be a handful!!!  Enjoyed reading your lat-night tumble of thoughts!!! There were some VERY interesting lines! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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dickpoetry Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 89 |
earth angel, earth angel, the one i adore love you forever, forever more those lines play in my head from my boyhood thank you, earth angel, for the welcome dp |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
What, only one comment on this fine poem. It's up to the top of the page with this one for more comments. |
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